At Life I wouldn't portray a Sacrifice
D world wouldn't pray one damn bit can dey
Least souls playing d surface of nutrition
Narrowness shouldn't ever sing d plan of infinity
Hard 2 decipher this quartet may think most truly
Laden with glitterati sounds lame enough
Writin epithets were a thing of the past
Blaring cannisters blind the truth and so
Trespassers luv the adrenaline that laughters gotta offer
Celebrations and joys still last 2 forgive
Land this one on me and surrogate
Sense was a thing of the past but audacity holds the key.!
Ajay Padattil
03/08/2009
Although the essence of it was not entirely understood, I loved your lines...the selection of words, the rhythm and everything about it :) U have the gift, dude! Keep writing!
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